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"Rural Wake"
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"Rural Wake"

My own poem
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This poem was published in the June 2022 issue of The Blotter.

“Rural Wake”

At the rains' end,
The farmhand carried two dead mice
From the barn but
Its two citizens in their stalls
Among dry, warm shavings didn't care to notice.

The bay horse did not turn
From the hanged hay bag
He was defrocking.
His lean flanks built to his marbled neck,
His name was Irish.

The Connemara pony keened
Across her sun-spotted turnout,
For the all-powerful alfalfa as she knew to
Anticipate. The call filled the barn
Aisle also, like she'd cried for the killed mice.

The farmhand bore
Their paired corpses in his own
Oiled dirt-flecked rag,
His veteran hands, reverent,
So nearly cradling them
Through the inadequate fabric.

Their furred rumps didn't shake
In his steps, their threaded tails lay still.
Each one had been snapped while alone
But the couple were found together, joined
Like martyrs by the two tiny guillotines.

He bore them heavily to the manure pile, to
Disturb, memorialize, its mass of clouding sweet scent
With the unnoticed addition of the two mice.
A sweltering sun had overthrown the afternoon,
Coating the farmhand's neck and underarms in thin sweat lashes

So that he laid down, with the care of the first, the dead
To shed his borrowed olive coat before he dug,
Just his caked boot kicking in the door of the inferno.
Greater heat greeted him. It singed his charges' whiskers,
Lighting now too late those small unused fuses,

But the farmhand smells only the manure he has breached,
He ties his rag shut around the corpses,

Already aflame.
In this genteel veil, they enter the farm's maw.

Oh it was a feckin' shame, Irish would say
Only when the boy returned
To haul new grain before his stall.
Erinn would crowd the farmhand
As he maintained her with another meal.

In the stalls mice aren't worth a sniff.
Not a glance when killed
For sneaking into the horses' feed.
But Irish would've spoken truly, had he cared to speak.
It is, to the very roots of the land, a shame that the traps have stolen
The pride of purpose from the plumped cat in her hamper.
From her the unfeeling bars have taken the dance-like deaths of mice,
As the manure's new tinder had, but only once,
Fatally stolen the farmhand's cheddar bait.

Their bodies, their very paws and hairs a crime, dissolve in the heat.
The farmhand has not reentered the barn, perhaps he won't.
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